Category: crush-depth
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Crush Depth 14: Chapters 24-26 – The Aftermath
Older posts can be found at the bottom of the main Crush Depth page. In the last post, the mosasaurs attacked in waves and the crew of the habitat fought them off. This is somewhat different than the first two Crush Depth drafts where there was one big attack that the submarine wasn’t able to…
Ryan Patrick
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Crush Depth 13: Chapters 21-23 – The Big Attack
Old posts are on the main Crush Depth page at the bottom. This has been the midpoint of every single draft – and, yes, this is the fourth full version of this story concept! Versions 1 and 2 had the mosasaurs attack the USS Arizona, Versions 3 and 4 switched that to the underwater habitat…
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Crush Depth 12: Chapters 18-20 – Just Before the Big Attack
These have been done for a week or so but I’m just getting around to doing this now. Old ones are here at the bottom of the page. If you saw my last post you know that I went back and rewrote a ton of what I have, mostly in a flow state in the…
Ryan Patrick
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Crush Depth 11: New Chapters 1-17
As I mentioned in the last blog update (they all can be found at the bottom of the page here) I went back and rewrote all 40,000+ words in the last few weeks. Here’s the new version: As you can see it’s a very different book based on the same concept. I’m leaning into some…
Ryan Patrick
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Crush Depth 10: Redo!
Tell me if you’ve heard this one before (and no, I’m not singing “Miami” by Taking Back Sunday) – I’m rewriting Crush Depth. I noted in my last update that I had slowed down. I wasn’t getting the words out. It wasn’t fun anymore. So I did what I normally do – I converted my…
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Crush Depth 9: The Plot Thickens – Chapters 15-17
Previous blog posts in this series are found at the bottom of the Crush Depth main page. Chapter 14 ended with a dead-end – the yacht that had no connection to the Vepr or any of their mission. Again, that’s probably a weak plot point but the character development and some interesting nuggets that I…
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Crush Depth 8: Investigation – Chapters 12-14
The other posts in this series taking you deep inside my writing process are found on the main Crush Depth page. A note that I’m probably taking about a month or so off on these posts while I fix some (small) issues – I got a bit stuck on Chapter 19 – but I’ll be…
Ryan Patrick
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Crush Depth 7: The Mystery Deepens – Chapters 9-11
Check the Crush Depth page for the previous posts in this series. So in Chapter 8 (the last chapter covered in my previous post) Grace Parkowski and the other two people on the submersible Nautilus narrowly evaded a near-ramming by what they will later discover is a mosasaur and then discovered part of the sunken…
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Crush Depth 6: First Encounter with the Mosasaurus – Chapters 6-8
Not going to link all of the previous 5 blog posts on the development of the third draft of Crush Depth, I’m going to put them on the book’s page and just refer back to it. At the end of Chapter 5, the novel’s protagonist, Grace Parkowski, has just been briefed on her next task…
Ryan Patrick
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Crush Depth 5 – To the Habitat! Chapters 3-5
So far, I’ve: And now we’re going to discuss Chapters 3 through 5! Chapter 3: Parkowski travels down an elevator on the oil rig to the habitat. The journey is like Deep Storm’s but the habitat below is like Sphere’s. At the end of Chapter 2, Grace Parkowski, the main character, is told that she’s…
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